Talk:Intermediate - Atrial Ventricular Septation

--Mark Hill 16:01, 2 October 2009 (EST)

I don't like the coloured boxes appearing over the heart, difficult to read, they should appear beside the image in a white space. Same comment for all animations with this layout of text boxes appearing.
Try and keep labels off the top of the image unless it has a specific purpose for being there.
Same comment as before concerning opening title and initial description of the heart.
All image labels should all be lower case.

I have not made all the changes that I have suggested to the uploaded PPT draft files, but you can see what I want File:Cardiac septation intermediate draft.ppt

--Phoebe Norville 17:12, 24 September 2009 (EST) First content added:

Content

Animation of Atrioventricular, Atrial and Ventricular Septation