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[[User:Z5229185|Z5229185]] ([[User talk:Z5229185|talk]]) 17:45, 4 October 2018 (AEST) I feel that the introduction sounded a bit off as referring to neural crest as a term seems rather inaccurate. A good history of the neural crest cells was provided and it is quite detailed (in fact it may be too detailed). | |||
I really like the hand drawing of the neural crest but I feel that it would look much better if you shifted the image to the right rather than let it take up the whole space. | |||
The content was pretty easy to follow and digest, so good job on that! You might want to take note on some errors in punctuation throughout the wiki page but since its just a draft, it isn't that big of an issue for now. | |||
The animal models section was really detailed and quite well written but the references need to be edited properly in the right format. I'm also a little confused as to why the picture of the "cascade of cathecholamine synthesis" is found right beside the Animal model section, you may want to adjust this! | |||
There are a few references present at the end of the page, but I assume this is because the other referrences have not been formated properly yet. | |||
Overall good job with the page so far! I can see that the flow is some what smooth already (except for the empty sections) but just take note that there are still a few tweaks to be done with the referencing and placement of images! | |||
[[User:Z5164785|Z5164785]] Perhaps describe the neural crest as a “structure” instead of a term. Great use of the student-drawn image as a guide! Overall, good simplified history. | [[User:Z5164785|Z5164785]] Perhaps describe the neural crest as a “structure” instead of a term. Great use of the student-drawn image as a guide! Overall, good simplified history. | ||
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In the current research section, the second sentence says ‘we generated’ … who are you referring to? The information here seems correct but was also quite advanced with numerous terms that I couldn’t understand- however it shows great research so well done! | In the current research section, the second sentence says ‘we generated’ … who are you referring to? The information here seems correct but was also quite advanced with numerous terms that I couldn’t understand- however it shows great research so well done! | ||
Overall, great work guys! Keep it up and move along with the project consistently! Perhaps include some images from the experiments you’ve described and some more high-tech images- although the ones you have drawn are also excellent! :) | Overall, great work guys! Keep it up and move along with the project consistently! Perhaps include some images from the experiments you’ve described and some more high-tech images- although the ones you have drawn are also excellent! :) | ||
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Z5229185 (talk) 17:45, 4 October 2018 (AEST) I feel that the introduction sounded a bit off as referring to neural crest as a term seems rather inaccurate. A good history of the neural crest cells was provided and it is quite detailed (in fact it may be too detailed).
I really like the hand drawing of the neural crest but I feel that it would look much better if you shifted the image to the right rather than let it take up the whole space.
The content was pretty easy to follow and digest, so good job on that! You might want to take note on some errors in punctuation throughout the wiki page but since its just a draft, it isn't that big of an issue for now.
The animal models section was really detailed and quite well written but the references need to be edited properly in the right format. I'm also a little confused as to why the picture of the "cascade of cathecholamine synthesis" is found right beside the Animal model section, you may want to adjust this!
There are a few references present at the end of the page, but I assume this is because the other referrences have not been formated properly yet.
Overall good job with the page so far! I can see that the flow is some what smooth already (except for the empty sections) but just take note that there are still a few tweaks to be done with the referencing and placement of images!
Z5164785 Perhaps describe the neural crest as a “structure” instead of a term. Great use of the student-drawn image as a guide! Overall, good simplified history.
In the normal structure and function region; good but rather brief discussion of the physiology and structure. perhaps a little bit more, and maybe an image- unless you merge it with the related anatomy component. Really love the adult adrenal gland and the effort behind it. Only complaint would be that perhaps it would have been good to have the regions of the kidney (medulla, cortex etc).
The description of the role of the adrenal medulla is very well-written; concise and seemingly accurate. Perhaps include the proper dot point structure instead of the >. The image drawn illustrating the cascade of catecholamine synthesis is also very good and I personally found it to be a helpful guide. However, it needs to be edited and correctly formatted for the webpage.
The first two sentences of the animal models section may be combined into one. Proof-reading required eg. as explained above ‘nueral’! Who is Ahonen- Is an in-text reference needed here? Perhaps this paragraph belongs in the current research section as the animal used hasn’t been mentioned. Please review this bit as the information provided is good and relevant but maybe in the wrong section.
In the current research section, the second sentence says ‘we generated’ … who are you referring to? The information here seems correct but was also quite advanced with numerous terms that I couldn’t understand- however it shows great research so well done!
Overall, great work guys! Keep it up and move along with the project consistently! Perhaps include some images from the experiments you’ve described and some more high-tech images- although the ones you have drawn are also excellent! :)
Group 1 discussion:
introduction
Z5014972 (talk) 12:47, 14 August 2018 (AEST)z5014972
A really good review article can be found here: https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007%2Fs12022-009-9070-6 as well as here: https://www.jstage.jst.go.jp/article/jvms/66/6/66_6_635/_pdf ( Z5113627 )
history
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK10065/
z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 21:01, 25 August 2018 (AEST)
Z5091101 (talk) 17:29, 4 September 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 17:29, 4 September 2018 (AEST)
A paper with some info on discovery/history https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/19179766
Can we please add normal anatomy of the adrenal medulla as a subheading - normal anatomy of adult medulla Was history referring to the history of discovery?
Z5091101 (talk) 11:46, 4 September 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 11:46, 4 September 2018 (AEST)
make a schematic drawing flow diagram outlining briefly history of neural crest
History of endocrine development (add to intro)
Z5091101 (talk) 15:47, 12 September 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 15:47, 12 September 2018 (AEST)
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3425661/
https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1002/dvdy.21513
Z5091101 (talk) 16:56, 12 September 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 16:56, 12 September 2018 (AEST)
embryonic origins
Z5091101 (talk) 11:46, 4 September 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 11:46, 4 September 2018 (AEST) https://clinicalgate.com/neural-crest/ Want to upload either image - https://clinicalgate.com/neural-crest/ - https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/3d/Figure_43_06_01.jpg
Origin is from neural crest cells; ectoderm
https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s12038-008-0098-4
developmental time course
developmental/adult function
tissue/organ structure
The tissue and organ structure of the adrenal medulla should be understood with regard to its specialized function within the sympathetic nervous system.
molecular mechanisms/factors/genes
abnormalities/abnormal development
animal models
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/21175739
Prenatal adrenal gland development has been described in numerous published reports covering a wide variety of species, including the ox (Katznelson, 1966; Wrobel and Suss, 1999), sheep (Davies, 1950; Wintour et al., 1975; Upadhyay and Zamboni, 1982; Naaman‐Reperant and Durand, 1997; Grino, 2004), swine (Sokolov et al., 2006) and mouse (Waring, 1935; Ikeda et al., 1994; Sass, 1996; Nyska and Maronpot, 1999; Bland et al., 2003; Val et al., 2007). Adrenal gland development also has been extensively described for humans as well (Kolliker, 1879; Minot, 1892; Zuckerkandl, 1912; Wieman, 1920; Ikeda et al., 1981; Langlois et al., 2002; Hanley and Arit, 2006), One‐Humped Camel (Camelus dromedarius)
current research (labs)
glossary
reference list
Z5091101 (talk) 11:40, 14 August 2018 (AEST)
Z5014972 (talk) 11:42, 14 August 2018 (AEST)z5014972
Week 4 researching:
- developmental time course
- developmental/adult function
- tissue/organ structure
Z5112688 (talk) 11:43, 14 August 2018 (AEST)Z5112688
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- ↑ Mansfield CW, Carr BR, Faye-Petersen OM, Chen D, Xing Y, Rainey WE & Parker CR. (2011). Differential gene expression in the adrenals of normal and anencephalic fetuses and studies focused on the Fras-1-related extracellular matrix protein (FREM2) gene. Reprod Sci , 18, 1146-53. PMID: 22031191 DOI.
- ↑ Yamaguchi-Shima N, Okada S, Shimizu T, Usui D, Nakamura K, Lu L & Yokotani K. (2007). Adrenal adrenaline- and noradrenaline-containing cells and celiac sympathetic ganglia are differentially controlled by centrally administered corticotropin-releasing factor and arginine-vasopressin in rats. Eur. J. Pharmacol. , 564, 94-102. PMID: 17350615 DOI.
- ↑ Bronner ME. (2012). Formation and migration of neural crest cells in the vertebrate embryo. Histochem. Cell Biol. , 138, 179-86. PMID: 22820859 DOI.
- ↑ Xing Y, Lerario AM, Rainey W & Hammer GD. (2015). Development of adrenal cortex zonation. Endocrinol. Metab. Clin. North Am. , 44, 243-74. PMID: 26038200 DOI.