Talk:Intermediate - Atrial Ventricular Septation: Difference between revisions
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I have not made all the changes that I have suggested to the uploaded PPT draft files, but you can see what I want [[File:Cardiac_septation_intermediate_draft.ppt]] | |||
--[[User:Z3212774|Phoebe Norville]] 17:12, 24 September 2009 (EST) First content added: | --[[User:Z3212774|Phoebe Norville]] 17:12, 24 September 2009 (EST) First content added: | ||
Revision as of 16:18, 2 October 2009
--Mark Hill 16:01, 2 October 2009 (EST)
Media:Cardiac_septation_001.mov | Media:Cardiac_septation_002.mov
- I don't like the coloured boxes appearing over the heart, difficult to read, they should appear beside the image in a white space. Same comment for all animations with this layout of text boxes appearing.
- Try and keep labels off the top of the image unless it has a specific purpose for being there.
- Same comment as before concerning opening title and initial description of the heart.
- All image labels should all be lower case.
I have not made all the changes that I have suggested to the uploaded PPT draft files, but you can see what I want File:Cardiac septation intermediate draft.ppt
--Phoebe Norville 17:12, 24 September 2009 (EST) First content added:
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File:HeartILP draft animpic007.jpg
Animation of Atrioventricular, Atrial and Ventricular Septation
