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===Group Project Page History===
* [[User:Z5160977|Z5160977]] - 26
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* Only 3 main edits days - 11 September 2018‎, 8 September, 8 October 2018‎
* 16:05, 17 October 2018‎ Z8600021 m . . (37,684 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Protected "2018 Group Project 1")
* 11:38, 16 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (35,558 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)
* 11:37, 16 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (35,552 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Anatomy and Functions)
* 11:36, 16 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (35,546 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎History)
* 11:06, 15 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (30,372 bytes) (-1)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)
* 11:06, 15 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (30,373 bytes) (-176)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)
* 21:30, 14 October 2018‎ Z5113627 . . (30,549 bytes) (+86)‎ . . (→‎Genes and Transcription Factors Involved with the Adrenal Medulla's Development)
* 15:12, 12 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (24,386 bytes) (+2)‎ . .
* '''23:03, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (18,140 bytes) (+447)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)'''
* 22:02, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,710 bytes) (-1)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 21:59, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,711 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 21:59, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,705 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 21:57, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,699 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 21:57, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,699 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 21:56, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,693 bytes) (+5)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 21:55, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,688 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 21:54, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,688 bytes) (+49)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 15:15, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (9,794 bytes) (+5)‎ . . (→‎Embryonic origins)
* 15:14, '''28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (9,789 bytes) (-605)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)'''
* 15:14, '''28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,394 bytes) (-453)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)'''
* 15:13, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,847 bytes) (+62)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 15:12, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,785 bytes) (+62)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 15:11, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,723 bytes) (+31)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 15:09, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,692 bytes) (+31)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* 14:33, '''28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,661 bytes) (+523)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)'''
* 14:31, '''28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,138 bytes) (+497)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)'''
* 15:51, 17 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (7,042 bytes) (+192)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
* '''11:37, 11 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (4,025 bytes) (+867)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)'''
* 14:17, 2 August 2018‎ Z8600021 . . (89 bytes) (+89)‎ . . (Created page with "{{2018ANAT2341ProjectHeader}} <!-- Students
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* [[User:Z5113627|Z5113627]] - 52
31 July 2018
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==Reference==
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==Peer Assessment Week 10==
[[User:Z8600021|Mark Hill]] ([[User talk:Z8600021|talk]]) 11:29, 11 October 2018 (AEDT) You have provided some reasonable peer feedback in your very brief assessments that includes both positive and negative components. Your feedback is consistent in that it looks at common features in each project, in particular the introduction sections. You also offer suggestions that could improve the final submissions. My own feedback would be perhaps providing a slightly longer feedback. Also when identifying "formatting issues", it is always good to give an example. I hope the groups consider this along with other feedback on their final submission next week. Many thanks.
Melanocytes
The introduction is good, however it may be helpful to mention more the embryonic development and an outline of what is going to be talked about. There are good subheadings, some need some content though. The division throughout the page of ears and eyes etc. is very clear. A short paragraph at the start of adult structure and function to tie it together (also in abnormalities, in case there are any in common). The pictures are helpful and assist understanding. There are a few formatting issues to clear up once the content is sorted. The references are looking good and there is evidence of a lot of research. The information so far is interesting, easy to follow and understand.
Cardiac
An introduction would be helpful to outline the project and bring in an understanding of development and neural crest contribution. The overview of the heart is very clear and detailed. Referencing needs a bit of work to ensure that the information is valid. There is a lot of in depth information which gives a detailed understanding of neural crest contribution to cardiac development. I would suggest reconsidering the structure, for example putting the developmental timeline earlier in the project.
Dorsal Root Ganglion
It would be good if there was a more fleshed out introduction, that outlined the purpose and scope of the project. The referencing is very comprehensive and shows that a lot of research has been put in. The information is presented will and is very in depth. In the Molecular Mechanisms section, I would suggest an introduction sentence or two, to tie the section together and help it to flow, overall it looks on track, but I would recommend having a think about the flow of the project and the layout of the information in terms of subheadings, an introduction would help to make that flow clear.

Latest revision as of 13:48, 23 October 2018

Group Project Page History

  • zero edits - 5
  • minimal edits - 8
  • Only 3 main edits days - 11 September 2018‎, 8 September, 8 October 2018‎
  • 16:05, 17 October 2018‎ Z8600021 m . . (37,684 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Protected "2018 Group Project 1")
  • 11:38, 16 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (35,558 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)
  • 11:37, 16 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (35,552 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Anatomy and Functions)
  • 11:36, 16 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (35,546 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎History)
  • 11:06, 15 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (30,372 bytes) (-1)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)
  • 11:06, 15 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (30,373 bytes) (-176)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)
  • 21:30, 14 October 2018‎ Z5113627 . . (30,549 bytes) (+86)‎ . . (→‎Genes and Transcription Factors Involved with the Adrenal Medulla's Development)
  • 15:12, 12 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (24,386 bytes) (+2)‎ . .
  • 23:03, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (18,140 bytes) (+447)‎ . . (→‎Introduction)
  • 22:02, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,710 bytes) (-1)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 21:59, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,711 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 21:59, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,705 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 21:57, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,699 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 21:57, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,699 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 21:56, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,693 bytes) (+5)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 21:55, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,688 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 21:54, 8 October 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (17,688 bytes) (+49)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)


  • 15:15, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (9,794 bytes) (+5)‎ . . (→‎Embryonic origins)
  • 15:14, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (9,789 bytes) (-605)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 15:14, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,394 bytes) (-453)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 15:13, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,847 bytes) (+62)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 15:12, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,785 bytes) (+62)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 15:11, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,723 bytes) (+31)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 15:09, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,692 bytes) (+31)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 14:33, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,661 bytes) (+523)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 14:31, 28 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (10,138 bytes) (+497)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 15:51, 17 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (7,042 bytes) (+192)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 11:37, 11 September 2018‎ Z5160977 . . (4,025 bytes) (+867)‎ . . (→‎Developmental time course)
  • 14:17, 2 August 2018‎ Z8600021 . . (89 bytes) (+89)‎ . . (Created page with "
Projects 2018: 1 Adrenal Medulla | 3 Melanocytes | 4 Cardiac | 5 Dorsal Root Ganglion

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