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Student REVIEWS: Melanocytes Peer review: Hello. I have had a look at your project and it seems your group is doing really well overall. There seems to be some missing information on the skin, I assume you are still researching that and collating your information. The use of images throughout is excellent, all your images are properly referenced and a good example to learn from. I cannot really suggest anything at this point apart from to keep researching and get going with the missing sections.

Group 4: cardiac Z5091101 (talk) 20:10, 3 October 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 20:10, 3 October 2018 (AEST) This project is coming along very well. Perhaps consider using a few more references as your list seems short. Also, I did like the use of a video but ideally it should be very short. I don't feel that many people will actually watch a 9 minute video. Perhaps a stop motion clip or a flow chart summary could replace this to make it easy to understand? Overall this is great work and seems to be a rather complex topic. Keep it up group 4.

Group 5:DRG [User:Z5091101|Z5091101]] (talk) 20:14, 3 October 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 20:14, 3 October 2018 (AEST) There has been an extensive use of references which is great especially since this topic seems to be really complex. Maybe a few more images for the beginning part of the article will make it look more user-friendly. Definitely have a look over for any grammar/spelling issues.


Neuropore cell shape changes.png

Neuropore cell shape changes[1]


  1. Shinotsuka N, Yamaguchi Y, Nakazato K, Matsumoto Y, Mochizuki A & Miura M. (2018). Caspases and matrix metalloproteases facilitate collective behavior of non-neural ectoderm after hindbrain neuropore closure. BMC Dev. Biol. , 18, 17. PMID: 30064364 DOI.

Reference

PMID: 30056110


Walls ML & Hart RJ. (2018). In vitro maturation. Best Pract Res Clin Obstet Gynaecol , , . PMID: 30056110 DOI.


In vitro maturation recent articleCite error: Invalid <ref> tag; name cannot be a simple integer. Use a descriptive title

Mark Hill (talk) 13:33, 31 July 2018 (AEST) You have left out the second PMID, see correct code below:

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