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Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction | Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction. | ||
===Group 3- Heart=== | |||
====Developmental Origin==== | |||
Very thorough explanation of the development with good reference to embryonic cell layers from which certain areas of the heart originate. Not only were images used, they were explained and referenced in the body of text, which further clarified development. | |||
====Developmental Timeline==== | |||
Very detailed explanation of the timeline of development. However, some images were not explained in great detail which made it difficult to comprehend exactly what was occurring during certain stages of development. Other than that, very well done. | |||
====Developmental Signalling Processes==== | |||
Started off really well with thorough explanation of several signalling pathways which included images to further clarify the information. However, towards the end there were several pathways which were mentioned but not explored further. If these pathways were expanded on, it would be a perfect overview of the signalling processes for heart development. | |||
====Animal Models & Current Research==== | |||
Although this part of the criteria were discussed, I felt like you could have used more research findings and models to provide a more detailed analysis of your research area. | |||
====Abnormal Development==== | |||
Good explanation of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the heart. Could have added in a few MRI scan images of the heart to further enhance your discussion. | |||
===Group 4 - Eye=== | |||
Revision as of 14:30, 12 October 2017
2017 Project Groups | |||||
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Group 1 | Group 2 | Group 3 | Group 4 | Group 5 | Group 6 |
Mark Hill - Lab 1 page |
Here is the Student Page demonstration page I showed in the Practical class.
Use this page to practice editing and don't forget to add a topic to the 2017 Group Project 2 page.
Peer Assessment
Group 1 - Cortex
Developmental Origin
Correctly outlined the developmental origin of the cortex and provided a thorough explanation of different cell types and their role in development. However, the 3 stages of cerebral cortex development mentioned in introduction could have been explained in more thorough detail.
Developmental Timeline
Very thorough and accurate depiction of the developmental timeline with reference to the molecular processes occurring during development . I liked the use of the image which provided a more complete picture of development. Good job.
Developmental Signalling Process
There was no explanation of the signalling process occurring during cortical development. I would recommend including this as a separate heading under developmental timeline and mentioning the genes expressed, transcription and growth factors etc.
Current Research & Future Questions
I didn't notice any mention of future implications in the area that is being studied. You can either incorporate this into the abnormal development section by talking about future research areas for different conditions, or have it as its own heading.
Animal Models
Animal models were not discussed in the wiki
Abnormal Development
Very good discussion of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the cortex. Use of MRI images made the abnormalities more clear and easier to understand.
Other notes
Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction.
Group 3- Heart
Developmental Origin
Very thorough explanation of the development with good reference to embryonic cell layers from which certain areas of the heart originate. Not only were images used, they were explained and referenced in the body of text, which further clarified development.
Developmental Timeline
Very detailed explanation of the timeline of development. However, some images were not explained in great detail which made it difficult to comprehend exactly what was occurring during certain stages of development. Other than that, very well done.
Developmental Signalling Processes
Started off really well with thorough explanation of several signalling pathways which included images to further clarify the information. However, towards the end there were several pathways which were mentioned but not explored further. If these pathways were expanded on, it would be a perfect overview of the signalling processes for heart development.
Animal Models & Current Research
Although this part of the criteria were discussed, I felt like you could have used more research findings and models to provide a more detailed analysis of your research area.
Abnormal Development
Good explanation of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the heart. Could have added in a few MRI scan images of the heart to further enhance your discussion.
Group 4 - Eye
Z5076039 (talk) 18:19, 23 September 2017 (AEST)