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====Other notes====
====Other notes====
Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction
Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction.
 
===Group 3- Heart===
====Developmental Origin====
Very thorough explanation of the development with good reference to embryonic cell layers from which certain areas of the heart originate. Not only were images used, they were explained and referenced in the body of text, which further clarified development.
 
====Developmental Timeline====
Very detailed explanation of the timeline of development. However, some images were not explained in great detail which made it difficult to comprehend exactly what was occurring during certain stages of development. Other than that, very well done.
 
====Developmental Signalling Processes====
Started off really well with thorough explanation of several signalling pathways which included images to further clarify the information. However, towards the end there were several pathways which were mentioned but not explored further. If these pathways were expanded on, it would be a perfect overview of the signalling processes for heart development.
 
====Animal Models & Current Research====
Although this part of the criteria were discussed, I felt like you could have used more research findings and models to provide a more detailed analysis of your research area.
 
====Abnormal Development====
Good explanation of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the heart. Could have added in a few MRI scan images of the heart to further enhance your discussion.
 
===Group 4 - Eye===


   
   

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Mark Hill - Lab 1 page

Dummy

Student Page

PubMed

Here is the Student Page demonstration page I showed in the Practical class.

Use this page to practice editing and don't forget to add a topic to the 2017 Group Project 2 page.

Peer Assessment

Group 1 - Cortex

Developmental Origin

Correctly outlined the developmental origin of the cortex and provided a thorough explanation of different cell types and their role in development. However, the 3 stages of cerebral cortex development mentioned in introduction could have been explained in more thorough detail.

Developmental Timeline

Very thorough and accurate depiction of the developmental timeline with reference to the molecular processes occurring during development . I liked the use of the image which provided a more complete picture of development. Good job.

Developmental Signalling Process

There was no explanation of the signalling process occurring during cortical development. I would recommend including this as a separate heading under developmental timeline and mentioning the genes expressed, transcription and growth factors etc.

Current Research & Future Questions

I didn't notice any mention of future implications in the area that is being studied. You can either incorporate this into the abnormal development section by talking about future research areas for different conditions, or have it as its own heading.

Animal Models

Animal models were not discussed in the wiki

Abnormal Development

Very good discussion of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the cortex. Use of MRI images made the abnormalities more clear and easier to understand.

Other notes

Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction.

Group 3- Heart

Developmental Origin

Very thorough explanation of the development with good reference to embryonic cell layers from which certain areas of the heart originate. Not only were images used, they were explained and referenced in the body of text, which further clarified development.

Developmental Timeline

Very detailed explanation of the timeline of development. However, some images were not explained in great detail which made it difficult to comprehend exactly what was occurring during certain stages of development. Other than that, very well done.

Developmental Signalling Processes

Started off really well with thorough explanation of several signalling pathways which included images to further clarify the information. However, towards the end there were several pathways which were mentioned but not explored further. If these pathways were expanded on, it would be a perfect overview of the signalling processes for heart development.

Animal Models & Current Research

Although this part of the criteria were discussed, I felt like you could have used more research findings and models to provide a more detailed analysis of your research area.

Abnormal Development

Good explanation of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the heart. Could have added in a few MRI scan images of the heart to further enhance your discussion.

Group 4 - Eye

Z5076039 (talk) 18:19, 23 September 2017 (AEST)

 2017 ANAT2341 - Timetable | Course Outline | Group Projects | Moodle | Tutorial 1 | Tutorial 2 | Tutorial 3

Labs: 1 Fertility and IVF | 2 ES Cells to Genome Editing | 3 Preimplantation and Early Implantation | 4 Reproductive Technology Revolution | 5 Cardiac and Vascular Development | 6 CRISPR-Cas9 | 7 Somitogenesis and Vertebral Malformation | 8 Organogenesis | 9 Genetic Disorders | 10 Melanocytes | 11 Stem Cells | 12 Group

Lectures: 1 Introduction | 2 Fertilization | 3 Week 1/2 | 4 Week 3 | 5 Ectoderm | 6 Placenta | 7 Mesoderm | 8 Endoderm | 9 Research Technology | 10 Cardiovascular | 11 Respiratory | 12 Neural crest | 13 Head | 14 Musculoskeletal | 15 Limb | 16 Renal | 17 Genital | 18 Endocrine | 19 Sensory | 20 Fetal | 21 Integumentary | 22 Birth | 23 Stem cells | 24 Revision

 Student Projects: 1 Cortex | 2 Kidney | 3 Heart | 4 Eye | 5 Lung | 6 Cerebellum