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==Peer Assessment== | ==Peer Assessment== | ||
===Group 1 - Cortex=== | ===Group 1 - Cortex=== | ||
====Developmental Origin==== | |||
Correctly outlined the developmental origin of the cortex and provided a thorough explanation of different cell types and their role in development. However, the 3 stages of cerebral cortex development mentioned in introduction could have been explained in more thorough detail. | |||
====Developmental Timeline==== | |||
Very thorough and accurate depiction of the developmental timeline with reference to the molecular processes occurring during development . I liked the use of the image which provided a more complete picture of development. Good job. | |||
====Developmental Signalling Process==== | |||
There was no explanation of the signalling process occurring during cortical development. I would recommend including this as a separate heading under developmental timeline and mentioning the genes expressed, transcription and growth factors etc. | |||
====Current Research & Future Questions==== | |||
I didn't notice any mention of future implications in the area that is being studied. You can either incorporate this into the abnormal development section by talking about future research areas for different conditions, or have it as its own heading. | |||
====Animal Models==== | |||
Animal models were not discussed in the wiki | |||
====Abnormal Development==== | |||
Very good discussion of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the cortex. Use of MRI images made the abnormalities more clear and easier to understand. | |||
====Other notes==== | |||
Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction. | |||
===Group 3- Heart=== | |||
====Developmental Origin==== | |||
Very thorough explanation of the development with good reference to embryonic cell layers from which certain areas of the heart originate. Not only were images used, they were explained and referenced in the body of text, which further clarified development. | |||
====Developmental Timeline==== | |||
Very detailed explanation of the timeline of development. However, some images were not explained in great detail which made it difficult to comprehend exactly what was occurring during certain stages of development. Other than that, very well done. | |||
====Developmental Signalling Processes==== | |||
Started off really well with thorough explanation of several signalling pathways which included images to further clarify the information. However, towards the end there were several pathways which were mentioned but not explored further. If these pathways were expanded on, it would be a perfect overview of the signalling processes for heart development. | |||
====Animal Models & Current Research==== | |||
Although this part of the criteria were discussed, I felt like you could have used more research findings and models to provide a more detailed analysis of your research area. | |||
====Abnormal Development==== | |||
Good explanation of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the heart. Could have added in a few MRI scan images of the heart to further enhance your discussion. | |||
===Group 4 - Eye=== | |||
====Developmental Origin==== | |||
A lot of the information was focussed on the anatomy of the eye instead of the embryonic development. You could have made this more concise and included it in an introduction paragraph. | |||
====Developmental Timeline==== | |||
Timeline could have been more detailed with reference to germinal cell layers. Some areas of the timeline were missing information. | |||
====Developmental Signalling Processes==== | |||
There was some mention of genes expressed during development of the eye, however it was not enough to obtain a full understanding of the signalling mechanism. I would recommend including a separate heading for signalling processes and exploring this area in more detail. | |||
====Current Research,Animal Models & Future Research==== | |||
There was no explicit mention of these research areas | |||
====Abnormal Development==== | |||
Good use of the table to summarise the developmental anomalies whilst providing some epidemiology. However, it would be good to expand on some of the conditions and discuss how things go wrong in the developmental pathway. | |||
===Group 5 - Lungs=== | |||
====Developmental Origin==== | |||
Very good explanation of the developmental origin throughout the wiki. Provided a clear understanding of the development of anatomical structures and their origin. | |||
====Developmental Timeline==== | |||
Outstanding developmental timeline which combined both developmental origin and key discoveries in the area of study. The use of images also made it easier to understand the processes being described. Well done. | |||
====Developmental Signalling Processes==== | |||
Good overview of the signalling processes. However, they could have been explained in further detail as the images were difficult to understand without the sufficient information to back them up. | |||
====Current Areas of Research and Future Research==== | |||
There was no explicit mention of current hot topics in the research area. | |||
====Animal Models==== | |||
Animal models were well described. Could include a few images to enhance your discussion. | |||
====Abnormal Development==== | |||
A wide range of anomalies were explored in a good amount of detail. You could try and mention the figures you included in your body of text and explain what physical abnormalities are visible in the images. | |||
===Group 6 - Cerebellum=== | |||
====Developmental Origin==== | |||
Very detailed explanation of the developmental origin with reference to the different cell types found in the cerebellum with their point of origin. Very good use of images to enhance your explanation. Well done. | |||
====Developmental Timeline & Key Discoveries==== | |||
Timeline was concise but sufficient due to developmental origin being described in great detail. The use of images for separate stages in the timeline was very useful in understanding the development. | |||
====Developmental Signalling Processes==== | |||
Could add in a flow chart to complement the body of info | |||
====Animal Models==== | |||
Provided a good overview with a specific case study of an animal model. It would be a good idea to include a few more studies. | |||
====Developmental Abnormalities==== | |||
Good overview of a wide range of abnormalities. Could have referred to the images in your discussion and described the physical abnormalities visible in each case. | |||
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Peer Assessment
Group 1 - Cortex
Developmental Origin
Correctly outlined the developmental origin of the cortex and provided a thorough explanation of different cell types and their role in development. However, the 3 stages of cerebral cortex development mentioned in introduction could have been explained in more thorough detail.
Developmental Timeline
Very thorough and accurate depiction of the developmental timeline with reference to the molecular processes occurring during development . I liked the use of the image which provided a more complete picture of development. Good job.
Developmental Signalling Process
There was no explanation of the signalling process occurring during cortical development. I would recommend including this as a separate heading under developmental timeline and mentioning the genes expressed, transcription and growth factors etc.
Current Research & Future Questions
I didn't notice any mention of future implications in the area that is being studied. You can either incorporate this into the abnormal development section by talking about future research areas for different conditions, or have it as its own heading.
Animal Models
Animal models were not discussed in the wiki
Abnormal Development
Very good discussion of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the cortex. Use of MRI images made the abnormalities more clear and easier to understand.
Other notes
Listing the anatomy and functions of the cerebral cortex felt unnecessary. Could have made it more concise and added it in as a separate paragraph to the introduction.
Group 3- Heart
Developmental Origin
Very thorough explanation of the development with good reference to embryonic cell layers from which certain areas of the heart originate. Not only were images used, they were explained and referenced in the body of text, which further clarified development.
Developmental Timeline
Very detailed explanation of the timeline of development. However, some images were not explained in great detail which made it difficult to comprehend exactly what was occurring during certain stages of development. Other than that, very well done.
Developmental Signalling Processes
Started off really well with thorough explanation of several signalling pathways which included images to further clarify the information. However, towards the end there were several pathways which were mentioned but not explored further. If these pathways were expanded on, it would be a perfect overview of the signalling processes for heart development.
Animal Models & Current Research
Although this part of the criteria were discussed, I felt like you could have used more research findings and models to provide a more detailed analysis of your research area.
Abnormal Development
Good explanation of the different conditions associated with abnormal development of the heart. Could have added in a few MRI scan images of the heart to further enhance your discussion.
Group 4 - Eye
Developmental Origin
A lot of the information was focussed on the anatomy of the eye instead of the embryonic development. You could have made this more concise and included it in an introduction paragraph.
Developmental Timeline
Timeline could have been more detailed with reference to germinal cell layers. Some areas of the timeline were missing information.
Developmental Signalling Processes
There was some mention of genes expressed during development of the eye, however it was not enough to obtain a full understanding of the signalling mechanism. I would recommend including a separate heading for signalling processes and exploring this area in more detail.
Current Research,Animal Models & Future Research
There was no explicit mention of these research areas
Abnormal Development
Good use of the table to summarise the developmental anomalies whilst providing some epidemiology. However, it would be good to expand on some of the conditions and discuss how things go wrong in the developmental pathway.
Group 5 - Lungs
Developmental Origin
Very good explanation of the developmental origin throughout the wiki. Provided a clear understanding of the development of anatomical structures and their origin.
Developmental Timeline
Outstanding developmental timeline which combined both developmental origin and key discoveries in the area of study. The use of images also made it easier to understand the processes being described. Well done.
Developmental Signalling Processes
Good overview of the signalling processes. However, they could have been explained in further detail as the images were difficult to understand without the sufficient information to back them up.
Current Areas of Research and Future Research
There was no explicit mention of current hot topics in the research area.
Animal Models
Animal models were well described. Could include a few images to enhance your discussion.
Abnormal Development
A wide range of anomalies were explored in a good amount of detail. You could try and mention the figures you included in your body of text and explain what physical abnormalities are visible in the images.
Group 6 - Cerebellum
Developmental Origin
Very detailed explanation of the developmental origin with reference to the different cell types found in the cerebellum with their point of origin. Very good use of images to enhance your explanation. Well done.
Developmental Timeline & Key Discoveries
Timeline was concise but sufficient due to developmental origin being described in great detail. The use of images for separate stages in the timeline was very useful in understanding the development.
Developmental Signalling Processes
Could add in a flow chart to complement the body of info
Animal Models
Provided a good overview with a specific case study of an animal model. It would be a good idea to include a few more studies.
Developmental Abnormalities
Good overview of a wide range of abnormalities. Could have referred to the images in your discussion and described the physical abnormalities visible in each case.
Z5076039 (talk) 18:19, 23 September 2017 (AEST)