User:Z3415242 - Revision history

Z8600021 at 02:02, 27 November 2014

2014-11-27T02:02:53Z

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	'''Foramen Ovale:''' is an opening located between two atria which bypasses the lung to allow blood to be channelled in the systemic circulation. Blood enters the right atrium then through foramen ovale and into the left atrium.		'''Foramen Ovale:''' is an opening located between two atria which bypasses the lung to allow blood to be channelled in the systemic circulation. Blood enters the right atrium then through foramen ovale and into the left atrium.

			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] Your summary does not describe what "Buerger’s disease" actually is (thromboangiitis obliterans), an inflammatory vasculopathy. Structure your summaries so that they make sense to any reader/assessor. Shunts are correct. (3/5)

	==Lab Online Assessment 5==		==Lab Online Assessment 5==
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	[2]. <pubmed>3566610</pubmed>		[2]. <pubmed>3566610</pubmed>

			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] You have cited Medscape as a source, that is not appropriate I want to see citation from the research literature rather than an online review. Your second reference does not relate to the topic, are you checking your work? Minor, you need help with your reference formatting, you should have resolved this by now this far into the course and project work. (2/5)


	==LAB 7==		==LAB 7==
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	Two types of teeth develop. Deciduous teeth and permanent teeth. Teeth develop from oral ectoderm, mesenchyme and neural crest cells. The tooth enamel is derived from the ectoderm of the oral cavity while the rest of the tissues differentiate from neural crest cells and mesenchyme. Tooth development involves induction between neural crest mesenchyme and oral epithelium.		Two types of teeth develop. Deciduous teeth and permanent teeth. Teeth develop from oral ectoderm, mesenchyme and neural crest cells. The tooth enamel is derived from the ectoderm of the oral cavity while the rest of the tissues differentiate from neural crest cells and mesenchyme. Tooth development involves induction between neural crest mesenchyme and oral epithelium.

			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] Once again, explain what Hes1 actually is before going into your summary. You need to spend some more time on these assessment items, it does not seem that you are understanding the content. Tooth summary is OK. (4/5)

	==Lab 8 Online Assessment==		==Lab 8 Online Assessment==
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	'''Transverse section of the ovary of a fox embryo.''' Primitive ova seen as the large clear cells		'''Transverse section of the ovary of a fox embryo.''' Primitive ova seen as the large clear cells

			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] This is much better than your previous assessment items. (5/5)
	==Lab 9 Online Assessment ==		==Lab 9 Online Assessment ==

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	Referencing is done in the correct format and it’s good everything is shown as a list on the bottom of the page. Overall the page needs improvement there is some evident of research done however there needs to be more headings added such as Historic findings. The recent finding heading could be placed more up on the page, before abnormality heading. Can have the different trimesters as subheading instead of separate headings. Can include a timeline in table format and also some diagrams or pictures of muscle development in head region and tendon development as well as possibly a video. Good background of embryonic development but since embryonic development is not related the project can summarise it a bit more and add more into fetal development of muscles.		Referencing is done in the correct format and it’s good everything is shown as a list on the bottom of the page. Overall the page needs improvement there is some evident of research done however there needs to be more headings added such as Historic findings. The recent finding heading could be placed more up on the page, before abnormality heading. Can have the different trimesters as subheading instead of separate headings. Can include a timeline in table format and also some diagrams or pictures of muscle development in head region and tendon development as well as possibly a video. Good background of embryonic development but since embryonic development is not related the project can summarise it a bit more and add more into fetal development of muscles.

			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] These are good critical assessments. Interesting that you comment on their referencing being correct, while you seem to have issues of your own with referencing. (9/10)

	== Online Assessment LAB 10 ==		== Online Assessment LAB 10 ==
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	https://embryology.med.unsw.edu.au/embryology/index.php/Sensory_-_Taste_Development#Taste_Buds		https://embryology.med.unsw.edu.au/embryology/index.php/Sensory_-_Taste_Development#Taste_Buds

			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] Once again, your article description jumps in with assumed knowledge about the technique and acronyms. Do you understand what WNT-Cre and PO-cre are used for here? The paper title usually directs you to what the major finding of the article will be. (4/5)

Z3415242: /* Lab Attendance */

2014-10-29T00:20:21Z

Lab Attendance

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	Lab 11 attendance--[[User:Z3415242\|Z3415242]] ([[User talk:Z3415242\|talk]]) 15:13, 22 October 2014 (EST)		Lab 11 attendance--[[User:Z3415242\|Z3415242]] ([[User talk:Z3415242\|talk]]) 15:13, 22 October 2014 (EST)

			Lab 12 attendance--[[User:Z3415242\|Z3415242]] ([[User talk:Z3415242\|talk]]) 11:20, 29 October 2014 (EST)

	==Lab Assessment 1==		==Lab Assessment 1==

Z8600021: /* Lab Online Assessment 3 */

2014-10-23T03:15:59Z

Lab Online Assessment 3

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	<references/>		<references/>


			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] These are appropriate references, I do not understand why you have formatted reference 3 differently? (4/5)

	==Lab Online Assessment 4==		==Lab Online Assessment 4==

Z8600021: /* Lab Online Assessment 2-IMAGE */

2014-10-23T03:13:40Z

Lab Online Assessment 2-IMAGE

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	{{Template:Student Image}}		{{Template:Student Image}}

			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] You needed to have remained the image file with a name identifying what it is showing, also include the reference, copyright and student template here as well as on your student page. This is so the information is always associated with the file itself no matter where it is used. You do not need to put the student template here on your page only with the file. (3/5)

	==Lab Online Assessment 3==		==Lab Online Assessment 3==

Z8600021 at 03:10, 23 October 2014

2014-10-23T03:10:41Z

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	--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] These articles are good for fertilisation.		--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] These articles are good for fertilisation. (5/5)

	==Lab Online Assessment 2-IMAGE==		==Lab Online Assessment 2-IMAGE==

Z8600021: /* Lab Assessment 1 */

2014-10-23T03:09:24Z

Lab Assessment 1

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	Autoscores obtained in all three groups were nearly identical and no statistically difference were found in study groups. MS localisation in relation to PB was very close ( <450) in 70.9% of oocytes. The rate of MS positive oocyte was highest in group with pregnancy but statistically not significant. Between oocyte selected and non-selected for ET, no statistically significant difference is numeral score of ZP was found. ZP manual evaluation indicated stronger bifringement when pregnancy was not achieved. The rate of MS positive oocyte was higher in group with pregnancy. None of this was statistically significant so it was concluded that polarisation microscopy imaging and rating of ZP and MS cannot be a direct predictor of IVF outcome.		Autoscores obtained in all three groups were nearly identical and no statistically difference were found in study groups. MS localisation in relation to PB was very close ( <450) in 70.9% of oocytes. The rate of MS positive oocyte was highest in group with pregnancy but statistically not significant. Between oocyte selected and non-selected for ET, no statistically significant difference is numeral score of ZP was found. ZP manual evaluation indicated stronger bifringement when pregnancy was not achieved. The rate of MS positive oocyte was higher in group with pregnancy. None of this was statistically significant so it was concluded that polarisation microscopy imaging and rating of ZP and MS cannot be a direct predictor of IVF outcome.


			--[[User:Z8600021\|Mark Hill]] These articles are good for fertilisation.

	==Lab Online Assessment 2-IMAGE==		==Lab Online Assessment 2-IMAGE==

Z3415242: /* Lab Attendance */

2014-10-22T04:13:18Z

Lab Attendance

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	Lab 10 attendance--[[User:Z3415242\|Z3415242]] ([[User talk:Z3415242\|talk]]) 11:43, 15 October 2014 (EST)		Lab 10 attendance--[[User:Z3415242\|Z3415242]] ([[User talk:Z3415242\|talk]]) 11:43, 15 October 2014 (EST)

			Lab 11 attendance--[[User:Z3415242\|Z3415242]] ([[User talk:Z3415242\|talk]]) 15:13, 22 October 2014 (EST)

	==Lab Assessment 1==		==Lab Assessment 1==

Z3415242: /* Online Assessment LAB 10 */

2014-10-21T22:43:19Z

Online Assessment LAB 10

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	Specific Cre mouse line, WNT-Cre and PO-cre were selected. These expressed Cre in a manner specific to Neural crest and thus these two Cre mouse lines were used to study NC derivation in developing tongue.		Specific Cre mouse line, WNT-Cre and PO-cre were selected. These expressed Cre in a manner specific to Neural crest and thus these two Cre mouse lines were used to study NC derivation in developing tongue.

	Four bitransgenic mouse strains Wnt1-Cre/R26R ~~orWnt1~~-Cre/ZEG and P0-Cre/R26R or P0-Cre/ZEG were generated as two Cre mouse line was bred with two report lines R26R lacZ reporter and ZEG(lacZ/EGFP) double reporter. By using PCR the mouse litter was then genotyped and the wild type littermates were used as negative controls of staining.		Four bitransgenic mouse strains Wnt1-Cre/R26R or Wnt1-Cre/ZEG and P0-Cre/R26R or P0-Cre/ZEG were generated as two Cre mouse line was bred with two report lines R26R lacZ reporter and ZEG(lacZ/EGFP) double reporter. By using PCR the mouse litter was then genotyped and the wild type littermates were used as negative controls of staining.
	Embryonic and postnatal mice were used and were staged by vaginal plug detection. Tissues were then collected and the label cell distribution was then analysed. Analysis of Wnt1-Cre and P0-Cre labelled cell distributions was performed using sagittal sections of tongue. LacZ gene product β-galactosidase and EGFP labels were localised at different magnification by confocal microscopy.		Embryonic and postnatal mice were used and were staged by vaginal plug detection. Tissues were then collected and the label cell distribution was then analysed. Analysis of Wnt1-Cre and P0-Cre labelled cell distributions was performed using sagittal sections of tongue. LacZ gene product β-galactosidase and EGFP labels were localised at different magnification by confocal microscopy.

Z3415242 at 14:12, 21 October 2014

2014-10-21T14:12:40Z

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	The results suggest the NC derivation of taste organs. The NC cells around the neural tube migrate in early embryonic stage. Migrated NC cell in the epithelium and mesenchyme of the tongue undergo proliferation and differentiation to achieve taste papillae.		The results suggest the NC derivation of taste organs. The NC cells around the neural tube migrate in early embryonic stage. Migrated NC cell in the epithelium and mesenchyme of the tongue undergo proliferation and differentiation to achieve taste papillae.

			<pubmed>22659543</pubmed>

	https://embryology.med.unsw.edu.au/embryology/index.php/Sensory_-_Taste_Development#Taste_Buds		https://embryology.med.unsw.edu.au/embryology/index.php/Sensory_-_Taste_Development#Taste_Buds

Z3415242: /* Online Assessment LAB 10 */

2014-10-21T13:51:15Z

Online Assessment LAB 10

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	The results suggest the NC derivation of taste organs. The NC cells around the neural tube migrate in early embryonic stage. Migrated NC cell in the epithelium and mesenchyme of the tongue undergo proliferation and differentiation to achieve taste papillae.		The results suggest the NC derivation of taste organs. The NC cells around the neural tube migrate in early embryonic stage. Migrated NC cell in the epithelium and mesenchyme of the tongue undergo proliferation and differentiation to achieve taste papillae.



			https://embryology.med.unsw.edu.au/embryology/index.php/Sensory_-_Taste_Development#Taste_Buds