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Project Assessment

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			* '''Introduction''' - section does include good introduction DRG and a useful image in this section.
	* '''History''' section covers early discoverers, but not a complete more recent timeline of DRG discoveries. For example, cell death and Nerve Growth Factor (NGF) during development. {{#pmid:1469378}}		* '''History''' section covers early discoverers, but not a complete more recent timeline of DRG discoveries. For example, cell death and Nerve Growth Factor (NGF) during development. {{#pmid:1469378}}
	* '''Molecular''' - useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.		* '''Molecular''' - useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.

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	File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome		File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome
	File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399 Student drawn image, should have been additional descriptive information as well as the original source upon which your drawing is based. I am also wondering what additional information this figure shows compared to the other figure on the project page?		File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399 Student drawn image, should have been additional descriptive information as well as the original source upon which your drawing is based. I am also wondering what additional information this figure shows compared to the other figure on the project page?
	File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish		File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish. Figure relates to project topic. description, reference, copyright and student template included. Where in the description is something about DRG? This should have been included here.
	File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.		File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.
	File:Microphotograph_of_drg.jpeg\|Z5229438 DRG neurons and satellite cells. Image source not correctly cited.		File:Microphotograph_of_drg.jpeg\|Z5229438 DRG neurons and satellite cells. Image source not correctly cited.

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	File:Illustration of Sox signalling pathway.jpg\|Z5229431 Student image pathway of Sox10		File:Illustration of Sox signalling pathway.jpg\|Z5229431 Student image pathway of Sox10
	File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome		File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome
	File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399		File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399 Student drawn image, should have been additional descriptive information as well as the original source upon which your drawing is based. I am also wondering what additional information this figure shows compared to the other figure on the project page?
	File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish		File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish
	File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.		File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.

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Project Assessment

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	* '''Molecular''' - useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.		* '''Molecular''' - useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.
	* '''Timeline of Neurogenesis''' - section provides a good summary of the mouse model of neurogenesis. Note that while there has been a general matching of mouse days to human days of development, this does not necessarily describe the specific mouse events in the project page timeline, and should not have been included here.		* '''Timeline of Neurogenesis''' - section provides a good summary of the mouse model of neurogenesis. Note that while there has been a general matching of mouse days to human days of development, this does not necessarily describe the specific mouse events in the project page timeline, and should not have been included here.
	* '''References''' - not clear why a (unnecessary) numbered list of references have been included at the start of the project page reference list? Total project 93 references. Recent project page references (5 years): 2018 (2), 2017 (3), 2016 (4), 2015 (4) and 2014 (2). Note PubMed results for "dorsal root ganglia development" the there are currently more than 4,500 articles, with last 5 years 764 articles.		* '''Videos''' - relevant to project topic.
			* '''Glossary''' - appears to focus on anatomical directions and only a few listed terms (5). This section should have included the acronyms (for example - CRPS, FZD, SCS, Nrg) and terminology.
			* '''Disorders''' - included some relevant disorders, such as Sjögren Syndrome and Sensory Ganglionitis. These are both "adult" disorders, should have included something more relevant to development abnormalities (congenital). Though for Sjögren Syndrome no molecular aspects such as aquaporins (AQPs) and anti AQPs autoantibodies in this section. {{#pmid:30380700}}
			* '''References''' - not clear why a (unnecessary) numbered list of references have been included at the start of the project page reference list? Total project 93 references. Recent project page references (5 years): 2018 (2), 2017 (3), 2016 (4), 2015 (4) and 2014 (2). Note PubMed results for "dorsal root ganglia development" the there are currently more than 4,500 articles, with last 5 years 764 articles. No specific identification (separation) of research articles and review papers within the project page?

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	* History section covers early discoverers, but not a complete more recent timeline of DRG discoveries. For example, cell death and Nerve Growth Factor (NGF) during development. {{#pmid:1469378}}		* '''History''' section covers early discoverers, but not a complete more recent timeline of DRG discoveries. For example, cell death and Nerve Growth Factor (NGF) during development. {{#pmid:1469378}}
	* ~~Useful~~ linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.		* '''Molecular''' - useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.
	* Timeline of Neurogenesis section provides a good summary of the mouse model of neurogenesis. Note that while there has been a general matching of mouse days to human days of development, this does not necessarily describe the specific mouse events in the project page timeline, and should not have been included here.		* '''Timeline of Neurogenesis''' - section provides a good summary of the mouse model of neurogenesis. Note that while there has been a general matching of mouse days to human days of development, this does not necessarily describe the specific mouse events in the project page timeline, and should not have been included here.
			* '''References''' - not clear why a (unnecessary) numbered list of references have been included at the start of the project page reference list? Total project 93 references. Recent project page references (5 years): 2018 (2), 2017 (3), 2016 (4), 2015 (4) and 2014 (2). Note PubMed results for "dorsal root ganglia development" the there are currently more than 4,500 articles, with last 5 years 764 articles.

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	* History section covers early discoverers, but not a complete more recent timeline of DRG discoveries. For example, cell death and Nerve Growth Factor (NGF) during development. {{#pmid:1469378}}		* History section covers early discoverers, but not a complete more recent timeline of DRG discoveries. For example, cell death and Nerve Growth Factor (NGF) during development. {{#pmid:1469378}}
	* Useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.		* Useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.
			* Timeline of Neurogenesis section provides a good summary of the mouse model of neurogenesis. Note that while there has been a general matching of mouse days to human days of development, this does not necessarily describe the specific mouse events in the project page timeline, and should not have been included here.


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Project Assessment

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			* History section covers early discoverers, but not a complete more recent timeline of DRG discoveries. For example, cell death and Nerve Growth Factor (NGF) during development. {{#pmid:1469378}}
			* Useful linking molecular factors to OMIM database demonstrates extension of the project content beyond the project page.

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	* Assessment feedback provided on figure page. 16 images.		* Assessment feedback provided on figure page. 16 images.
	* Six images sourced from Wikipedia rather than scientific research literature. This was described in class tutorials as not an acceptable source for your project work and only a minimal number of images (1-2) should have been sourced from here.		* Six images sourced from Wikipedia rather than scientific research literature. This was described in class tutorials as not an acceptable source for your project work and only a minimal number of images (1-2) should have been sourced from here.



			* [[user:Z5229438\|Z5229438]] - 6 images (3 Wikipedia)
			* [[User:Z5229431\|Z5229431]] - 5 images (2 Wikipedia)
			* [[User:Z5229597\|Z5229597]] - 4 images (1 Wikipedia)
			* [[User:Z5229399\|Z5229399]] - 1 image


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	* Assessment feedback provided on figure page. 16 images.		* Assessment feedback provided on figure page. 16 images.
	* Six images sourced from Wikipedia rather than scientific research literature. This was described as not an acceptable source for your project work and only a minimal number of images should have ~~benn~~ sourced from here.		* Six images sourced from Wikipedia rather than scientific research literature. This was described in class tutorials as not an acceptable source for your project work and only a minimal number of images (1-2) should have been sourced from here.

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	File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome		File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome
	File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399 Student drawn image, should have been additional descriptive information as well as the original source upon which your drawing is based. I am also wondering what additional information this figure shows compared to the other figure on the project page?		File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399 Student drawn image, should have been additional descriptive information as well as the original source upon which your drawing is based. I am also wondering what additional information this figure shows compared to the other figure on the project page?
	File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish		File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish. Figure relates to project topic. description, reference, copyright and student template included. Where in the description is something about DRG? This should have been included here.
	File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.		File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.
	File:Microphotograph_of_drg.jpeg\|Z5229438 DRG neurons and satellite cells. Image source not correctly cited.		File:Microphotograph_of_drg.jpeg\|Z5229438 DRG neurons and satellite cells. Image source not correctly cited.

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	File:Illustration of Sox signalling pathway.jpg\|Z5229431 Student image pathway of Sox10		File:Illustration of Sox signalling pathway.jpg\|Z5229431 Student image pathway of Sox10
	File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome		File:Sjogrens_syndrome_1.jpg\|Z5229438 sjogren syndrome
	File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399		File:Dorsal Root Ganglion (CCD).png\|Z5229399 Student drawn image, should have been additional descriptive information as well as the original source upon which your drawing is based. I am also wondering what additional information this figure shows compared to the other figure on the project page?
	File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish		File:Neural crest migration and somite development in zebrafish.jpeg\|Z5229431 Neural crest migration zebrafish
	File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.		File:Neural crest cell migration in erbb3b mutants.jpg\|Z5229431 Comparison of neural crest cell migration erbb3b mutants and wildtype zebrafish models. Figure required additional description.