Talk:2018 Group Project 3 - Revision history

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	* '''Introduction''' - Good introduction, defined what teh project page would cover.		* '''Introduction''' - Good introduction, defined what teh project page would cover.
	* '''History''' - I liked the very early history and how you kept this section to a minimum. Did not include the important chicken chimera studies (1970's). Should have linked to current research section for today.		* '''History''' - I liked the very early history and how you kept this section to a minimum. Did not include the important chicken chimera studies (1970's). Should have linked to current research section for today.
	* '''Developmental time course''' - good week-by-week structure. This seems to focus mainly on just the hair follicle melanoblasts? If there is no information for the other melanoblasts this should have been stated.,		* '''Developmental time course''' - good week-by-week structure. This seems to focus mainly on just the hair follicle melanoblasts? If there is no information for the other melanoblasts this should have been stated.
			* '''Abnormalities''' - several good examples are described. I wonder why the many types of "albinism" was not covered here (except for oculocutaneous albinism). Could have also linked to [https://www.omim.org OMIM] entries for these disorders.
	* '''Embryonic origins''' - covered reasonably well. This section on project page could have been better organised.		* '''Embryonic origins''' - covered reasonably well. This section on project page could have been better organised.
	* '''Current Research''' - several good inclusions in this section(s), though you have included twice (in 2 separate parts) on the project page, this reflects poor structure editing. Clumsy heading structure, should have been simplified.		* '''Current Research''' - several good inclusions in this section(s), though you have included twice (in 2 separate parts) on the project page, this reflects poor structure editing. Clumsy heading structure, should have been simplified.

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	* '''Developmental time course''' - good week-by-week structure. This seems to focus mainly on just the hair follicle melanoblasts? If there is no information for the other melanoblasts this should have been stated.,		* '''Developmental time course''' - good week-by-week structure. This seems to focus mainly on just the hair follicle melanoblasts? If there is no information for the other melanoblasts this should have been stated.,
	* '''Embryonic origins''' - covered reasonably well. This section on project page could have been better organised.		* '''Embryonic origins''' - covered reasonably well. This section on project page could have been better organised.
	* '''Current Research''' - several good inclusions in this section. Clumsy heading structure, should have been simplified.		* '''Current Research''' - several good inclusions in this section(s), though you have included twice (in 2 separate parts) on the project page, this reflects poor structure editing. Clumsy heading structure, should have been simplified.
	* '''References''' - significant research literature cited in project including recent research articles. Would have liked to also see a clear distinction in the text between "review" and "research" articles.		* '''References''' - significant research literature cited in project including recent research articles. Would have liked to also see a clear distinction in the text between "review" and "research" articles.

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Project Assessment

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	==Project Assessment==		==Project Assessment==
			* '''Introduction''' - Good introduction, defined what teh project page would cover.
			* '''History''' - I liked the very early history and how you kept this section to a minimum. Did not include the important chicken chimera studies (1970's). Should have linked to current research section for today.
			* '''Developmental time course''' - good week-by-week structure. This seems to focus mainly on just the hair follicle melanoblasts? If there is no information for the other melanoblasts this should have been stated.,
			* '''Embryonic origins''' - covered reasonably well. This section on project page could have been better organised.
			* '''Current Research''' - several good inclusions in this section. Clumsy heading structure, should have been simplified.
			* '''References''' - significant research literature cited in project including recent research articles. Would have liked to also see a clear distinction in the text between "review" and "research" articles.

	===Page History===		===Page History===

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	File:Hair Follicle.jpg\|Fig 5 hair follicle Z5229132 Student drawn image. All information correct and related to project.		File:Hair Follicle.jpg\|Fig 5 hair follicle Z5229132 Student drawn image. All information correct and related to project.
	File:Stria Vascularis diagram 2.jpeg\|Fig 6 Stria Vascularis Z5229132 All information correct and related to project.		File:Stria Vascularis diagram 2.jpeg\|Fig 6 Stria Vascularis Z5229132 All information correct and related to project.
	File:Left and Right Cochlea.jpeg\|Fig 7 Cochlea Z5229132		File:Left and Right Cochlea.jpeg\|Fig 7 Cochlea Z5229132 All information correct and related to project. You could have included some more information in your description.
	File:Melanocytes in Eyes of B6 and ep Mice.jpeg\|Fig 8 Pigmentation eyes Z5165679		File:Melanocytes in Eyes of B6 and ep Mice.jpeg\|Fig 8 Pigmentation eyes Z5165679
	File:Cardiac melanocyte in an embryonic mouse pup.png\|Fig 9 cardiac melanocyte Z5164785		File:Cardiac melanocyte in an embryonic mouse pup.png\|Fig 9 cardiac melanocyte Z5164785

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	* [[User:Z5165679\|Z5165679]] - 96		* [[User:Z5165679\|Z5165679]] - 96

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	* [[User:Z5229549\|Z5229549]] - 3 images (one copyright issue)		* [[User:Z5229549\|Z5229549]] - 3 images (one copyright issue)

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	File:Melanocyte1.jpg\|Fig 1 epidermal melanocyte Z5229549 Copyright infringement, you require the original publisher (Pearson) approval for reuse.		File:Melanocyte1.jpg\|Fig 1 epidermal melanocyte Z5229549 Copyright infringement, you require the original publisher (Pearson) approval for reuse.

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	File:Common_Vitiligo.jpg\|Fig 17 Depigmentation in Vitiligo Z5164785		File:Common_Vitiligo.jpg\|Fig 17 Depigmentation in Vitiligo Z5164785
	File:Uveal Melanoma.gif\|Fig 18 Ciliochoroidal melanoma in eye Z5165679		File:Uveal Melanoma.gif\|Fig 18 Ciliochoroidal melanoma in eye Z5165679
	File:Oculocutaneous_albinism_eyes.jpg\|Fig 19 OCA1A patient eyes Z5164785		File:Oculocutaneous_albinism_eyes.jpg\|Fig 19 OCA1A patient eyes Z5164785 All required information included. More detail to the description, including spelling out the acronym OCA1A as Oculocutaneous albinism, including a link to the OMIM entry for this disorder - OMIM 203100 OCA1A is caused by homozygous or compound heterozygous mutation in the tyrosinase gene (TYR; 606933) on chromosome 11q14.
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	* [[User:~~Z5165679~~\|~~Z5165679~~]]		* [[User:Z5229132\|Z5229132]] - 4 images
	* [[User:~~Z5164785~~\|~~Z5164785~~]]		* [[User:Z5229549\|Z5229549]] - 3 images (one copyright issue)
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	File:Hair Follicle.jpg\|Fig 5 hair follicle Z5229132 Student drawn image. All information correct and related to project.		File:Hair Follicle.jpg\|Fig 5 hair follicle Z5229132 Student drawn image. All information correct and related to project.
	File:Stria Vascularis diagram 2.jpeg\|Fig 6 Stria Vascularis Z5229132 All information correct and related to project.		File:Stria Vascularis diagram 2.jpeg\|Fig 6 Stria Vascularis Z5229132 All information correct and related to project.
	File:Left and Right Cochlea.jpeg\|Fig 7 Cochlea Z5229132		File:Left and Right Cochlea.jpeg\|Fig 7 Cochlea Z5229132 All information correct and related to project. You could have included some more information in your description.
	File:Melanocytes in Eyes of B6 and ep Mice.jpeg\|Fig 8 Pigmentation eyes Z5165679		File:Melanocytes in Eyes of B6 and ep Mice.jpeg\|Fig 8 Pigmentation eyes Z5165679
	File:Cardiac melanocyte in an embryonic mouse pup.png\|Fig 9 cardiac melanocyte Z5164785		File:Cardiac melanocyte in an embryonic mouse pup.png\|Fig 9 cardiac melanocyte Z5164785