Talk:2018 Group Project 1 - Revision history

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Project Assessment

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	* '''Developmental time course''' - early development covered but not detailed in regard to specific components and fetal functional development.		* '''Developmental time course''' - early development covered but not detailed in regard to specific components and fetal functional development.
	* '''Embryonic origins''' - neural crest migration mechanisms a good inclusion in this section. [[:File:Differentiation of NCC.jpg\|Figure]] relating to BMP-4 (bone morphogenetic protein 4) should have been located in the section where this is described within the text.		* '''Embryonic origins''' - neural crest migration mechanisms a good inclusion in this section. [[:File:Differentiation of NCC.jpg\|Figure]] relating to BMP-4 (bone morphogenetic protein 4) should have been located in the section where this is described within the text.
			* '''References''' - significant research literature cited in project including recent research articles. Would have liked more clear distinction in the text between "review" and "research" articles.

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Project Assessment

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	* '''History''' - covered early neural crest findings. The history section does not focus on the adrenal gland, in fact it is hardly covered at all here.		* '''History''' - covered early neural crest findings. The history section does not focus on the adrenal gland, in fact it is hardly covered at all here.
	* '''Developmental time course''' - early development covered but not detailed in regard to specific components and fetal functional development.		* '''Developmental time course''' - early development covered but not detailed in regard to specific components and fetal functional development.
	* '''Embryonic origins''' - neural crest migration mechanisms a good inclusion in this section.		* '''Embryonic origins''' - neural crest migration mechanisms a good inclusion in this section. [[:File:Differentiation of NCC.jpg\|Figure]] relating to BMP-4 (bone morphogenetic protein 4) should have been located in the section where this is described within the text.


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Project Assessment

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	* '''Introduction''' - section does include brief introduction of neural crest and identifies the specific topic to be covered on the project page. Would have benefited from an introductory image to balance the text section.		* '''Introduction''' - section does include brief introduction of neural crest and identifies the specific topic to be covered on the project page. Would have benefited from an introductory image to balance the text section.
	* '''History''' - covered early neural crest findings. The history section does not focus on the adrenal gland, in fact it is hardly covered at all here.		* '''History''' - covered early neural crest findings. The history section does not focus on the adrenal gland, in fact it is hardly covered at all here.
			* '''Developmental time course''' - early development covered but not detailed in regard to specific components and fetal functional development.
			* '''Embryonic origins''' - neural crest migration mechanisms a good inclusion in this section.

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	==Project Assessment==		==Project Assessment==
			* '''Introduction''' - section does include brief introduction of neural crest and identifies the specific topic to be covered on the project page. Would have benefited from an introductory image to balance the text section.
			* '''History''' - covered early neural crest findings. The history section does not focus on the adrenal gland, in fact it is hardly covered at all here.



	===Page History===		===Page History===

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Images

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	===Images===		===Images===
	Assessment feedback provided on figure page. 10 images.		Assessment feedback provided on figure page. 10 images. Half the images are student drawn images, which is a higher ratio than it should be if development articles and been better covered.

	* [[User:Z5091101\|Z5091101]] - 5 images		* [[User:Z5091101\|Z5091101]] - 5 images

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	===Images===		===Images===
			Assessment feedback provided on figure page. 10 images.

	* [[User:Z5091101\|Z5091101]] - 5 images		* [[User:Z5091101\|Z5091101]] - 5 images

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	===Images===		===Images===

			* [[User:Z5091101\|Z5091101]] - 5 images
			* [[User:Z5112688\|Z5112688]] - 2 images
			* [[User:Z5113627\|Z5113627]] - 2 images
			* [[User:Z5160977\|Z5160977]] - 1 image

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	File:Wilhelm_His_History_Wilhelm.jpeg\|Wilhelm His Z5091101 All required information included. Wikipedia image, you should have included more information in the description section.		File:Wilhelm_His_History_Wilhelm.jpeg\|Wilhelm His Z5091101 All required information included. Wikipedia image, you should have included more information in the description section.

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	File:Regions_of_NC_Cells.jpg\|Neural crest regions Z5091101 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. Not all required information has been included in summary.		File:Regions_of_NC_Cells.jpg\|Neural crest regions Z5091101 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. Not all required information has been included in summary.
	File:Adrenal_Medulla_Developmental_Timeline.jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Timeline Z5160977 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. All required information has been included in summary.		File:Adrenal_Medulla_Developmental_Timeline.jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Timeline Z5160977 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. All required information has been included in summary.
	File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101		File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Could have included more information in the description section of the summary.
	File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101		File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Could have included more information in the description section of the summary concerning BMP-4 and glucocorticoids
	File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not any required information included here in summary section. Should include a brief description and the source of of information used in preparing this drawing. The quality of the uploaded image also has quite poor contrast.		File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not any required information included here in summary section. Should include a brief description and the source of of information used in preparing this drawing. The quality of the uploaded image also has quite poor contrast.
	File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627		File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.
	File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.		File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.
	File:Adrenal gland.png\|TH - positive cells Z5112688 Image relevant to project page. Not all required information included here on summary section, missing link to reference. Should also include which species the study has been carried out in and included the reference in the figure legend on the project page, as well as in the associated text.		File:Adrenal gland.png\|TH - positive cells Z5112688 Image relevant to project page. Not all required information included here on summary section, missing link to reference. Should also include which species the study has been carried out in and included the reference in the figure legend on the project page, as well as in the associated text.

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	File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101		File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101
	File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101		File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101
	File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972		File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not any required information included here in summary section. Should include a brief description and the source of of information used in preparing this drawing. The quality of the uploaded image also has quite poor contrast.
	File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627		File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627
	File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.		File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.

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	File:Regions_of_NC_Cells.jpg\|Neural crest regions Z5091101 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. Not all required information has been included in summary.		File:Regions_of_NC_Cells.jpg\|Neural crest regions Z5091101 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. Not all required information has been included in summary.
	File:Adrenal_Medulla_Developmental_Timeline.jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Timeline Z5160977 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. All required information has been included in summary.		File:Adrenal_Medulla_Developmental_Timeline.jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Timeline Z5160977 Student drawn image, relevant to project page. All required information has been included in summary.
	File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101		File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Could have included more information in the description section of the summary.
	File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101		File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Could have included more information in the description section of the summary concerning BMP-4 and glucocorticoids
	File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not any required information included here in summary section. Should include a brief description and the source of of information used in preparing this drawing. The quality of the uploaded image also has quite poor contrast.		File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not any required information included here in summary section. Should include a brief description and the source of of information used in preparing this drawing. The quality of the uploaded image also has quite poor contrast.
	File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627		File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.
	File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.		File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.
	File:Adrenal gland.png\|TH - positive cells Z5112688 Image relevant to project page. Not all required information included here on summary section, missing link to reference. Should also include which species the study has been carried out in and included the reference in the figure legend on the project page, as well as in the associated text.		File:Adrenal gland.png\|TH - positive cells Z5112688 Image relevant to project page. Not all required information included here on summary section, missing link to reference. Should also include which species the study has been carried out in and included the reference in the figure legend on the project page, as well as in the associated text.

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	File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101		File:Trunk_NCC_migration.jpg\|Trunk NCC migration Z5091101
	File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101		File:Differentiation_of_NCC.jpg\|Differentiation of chromaffin cells Z5091101
	File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972		File:ADRENAL MEDULLA .jpg\|Adrenal Medulla Histology Z5014972 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not any required information included here in summary section. Should include a brief description and the source of of information used in preparing this drawing. The quality of the uploaded image also has quite poor contrast.
	File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627		File:Dd.jpg\|Adult Adrenal Glands in situ Z5113627
	File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.		File:Catecholamine_Synthesis.jpg\|Catecholamine Synthesis Z5113627 Student drawn image relevant to project page. Not all required information included in summary section, should include the source of of information used in preparing this drawing.