Talk:2017 Group Project 6 - Revision history

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	** Table - Abnormalities good design and content (peer teaching).		** Table - Abnormalities good design and content (peer teaching).
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
	** Future Questions - section gives some good directions, though some are not referenced, ~~which~~ would have increased their value (peer teaching).		** Future Questions - section gives some good directions, though some are not referenced and a little vague, referencing would have increased their value (peer teaching).
	* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.		* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.
	** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.		** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.

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	* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.		* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.
	* Reasonable balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.		* Reasonable balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.
			** YouTube video - useful and related inclusion.
	** Introduction - is a good summary of the project page.		** Introduction - is a good summary of the project page.
	** Table - First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space. This is probably the weakest design aspect to the page.		** Table - First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space. This is probably the weakest design aspect to the page.
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	** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.		** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.
	** Cell Signalling in Cerebellar Development - very good section content and figure usage. Could have done with a few more signalling pathway figures (peer teaching).		** Cell Signalling in Cerebellar Development - very good section content and figure usage. Could have done with a few more signalling pathway figures (peer teaching).
			* Terms - (glossary) is concise and well organised. Some of teh descriptions could have been better edited (grammar).
			* Referencing - reasonable coverage of literature and sources, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.
			** Ref 12 - Butts etal., was a good review article and has been extensively cited within the project page.
			** Ref 24 - is an incomplete citation.

	===Edits===		===Edits===

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	** Table - Abnormalities good design and content (peer teaching).		** Table - Abnormalities good design and content (peer teaching).
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
			** Future Questions - section gives some good directions, though some are not referenced, which would have increased their value (peer teaching).
	* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.		* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.
	** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.		** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.

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	** Table - First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space. This is probably the weakest design aspect to the page.		** Table - First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space. This is probably the weakest design aspect to the page.
	** Table - Key Historical Discoveries has a better design and content. Ramon y Cajal required text reference as well as the ref with the figure.		** Table - Key Historical Discoveries has a better design and content. Ramon y Cajal required text reference as well as the ref with the figure.
			** Table - Abnormalities good design and content (peer teaching).
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
	* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.		* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.

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	** Introduction - is a good summary of the project page.		** Introduction - is a good summary of the project page.
	** Table - First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space. This is probably the weakest design aspect to the page.		** Table - First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space. This is probably the weakest design aspect to the page.
			** Table - Key Historical Discoveries has a better design and content. Ramon y Cajal required text reference as well as the ref with the figure.
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
	* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.		* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.

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	* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.		* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.
	** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.		** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.
			** Cell Signalling in Cerebellar Development - very good section content and figure usage. Could have done with a few more signalling pathway figures (peer teaching).

	===Edits===		===Edits===

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	* Reasonable balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.		* Reasonable balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.
	** Introduction - is a good summary of the project page.		** Introduction - is a good summary of the project page.
	** First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space.		** Table - First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space. This is probably the weakest design aspect to the page.
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
	* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.		* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.
			** would have liked more in the "Cellular Migration" section as this has been an important aspect of cerebellar research.

	===Edits===		===Edits===

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	* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.		* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.
	* Reasonable balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.		* Reasonable balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.
			** Introduction - is a good summary of the project page.
	** First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space.		** First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space.
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.

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	==Assessment==		==Assessment==
			===General===
			* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.
			* Reasonable balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.
			** First Trimester table is poorly designed with large areas of "white" space.
			* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
			* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.

	===Edits===		===Edits===
	Total - 604		Total - 604

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	File:Screen Shot 2017-10-16 at 1.43.55 pm.png\|Fig 4: Cell types cerebellar cortical layers Z5076158 file name should be descriptive not screenshot		File:Screen Shot 2017-10-16 at 1.43.55 pm.png\|Fig 4: Cell types cerebellar cortical layers Z5076158 file name should be descriptive not screenshot

	File:2 day old embryo diagram.jpeg\|Fig 5 Diagram of a 2 Day Old Embryo Z5114433		File:2 day old embryo diagram.jpeg\|Fig 5 Diagram of a 2 Day Old Embryo Z5114433 removed for copyright.

	File:Primary Brain.png\|Fig 6 (Week 4) 3 primary brain vesicles Z5076158		File:Primary Brain.png\|Fig 6 (Week 4) 3 primary brain vesicles Z5076158