Talk:2017 Group Project 5 - Revision history

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	** I could suggest that the project needed some sort of conclusion or overview at the end.		** I could suggest that the project needed some sort of conclusion or overview at the end.
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
			* Peer teaching - language and structure appropriate for audience level.
	* YouTube video overview of the development of the respiratory system was a good inclusion and good animation.		* YouTube video overview of the development of the respiratory system was a good inclusion and good animation.
	** could have been inserted into project page in larger format for in-page viewing.		** could have been inserted into project page in larger format for in-page viewing.

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	** only one image in this section outlined in any detail the signalling process.		** only one image in this section outlined in any detail the signalling process.
	** needed perhaps some additional signaling pathway images.		** needed perhaps some additional signaling pathway images.
			* Abnormalities - had concise coverage of some of the respiratory abnormalities.
			** Formatting - CPAM (Congenital Pulmonary Airway Malformation) this heading should have been the other way around "Congenital Pulmonary Airway Malformation (CPAM)", it is usual to put the acronym after the text that it replaces.
	* Glossary - clearly organised table structure. Easy to read with good brief descriptions.		* Glossary - clearly organised table structure. Easy to read with good brief descriptions.
	** Not all project terminology has been included.		** Not all project terminology has been included.

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	* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.		* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.
	* Good balance of text and media.		* Good balance of text and media. I liked the use of tables and images on the project page.
			** I could suggest that the project needed some sort of conclusion or overview at the end.
	* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.		* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
	* YouTube video overview of the development of the respiratory system was a good inclusion and good animation.		* YouTube video overview of the development of the respiratory system was a good inclusion and good animation.

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	* z5062492 Videos that were taken from Mark Hill's Respiratory System page - Gastrointestinal 3D stage 13 Movie, Gastrointestinal Tract 3D stage 22 Movie		* z5062492 Videos that were taken from Mark Hill's Respiratory System page - Gastrointestinal 3D stage 13 Movie, Gastrointestinal Tract 3D stage 22 Movie
	* z5062492 Image taken from ANAT2241 Histology Respiratory histology 08.jpg		* z5062492 Image taken from ANAT2241 Histology Respiratory histology 08.jpg
			* Z5062492 - at least 2 of your uploaded images (cartoons) have no details of source or copyright. If they are your own drawings, it should say so in the summary box. I cannot assess these figures without this information. I have generally deleted such images from project pages.

	====Images General Notes====		====Images General Notes====

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	* Z5059373 - 5 images		* Z5059373 - 5 images
	* Z5062492 - 4 images (1 UNSW) and UNSW videos.		* Z5062492 - 4 images (1 UNSW) and UNSW videos. at least 2 of your uploaded images (cartoons) have no details of source or copyright.
	* Z5178462 - 3 images		* Z5178462 - 3 images
	* Z3332339 - 1 image		* Z3332339 - 1 image

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	* Referencing - mostly correctly cited and referenced, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.		* Referencing - mostly correctly cited and referenced, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.
	** why were there 9 reference links inserted at the beginning of the list? These appear as numbered references but are not associated with any content.		** why were there 9 reference links inserted at the beginning of the list? These appear as numbered references but are not associated with any content.
			** Some recent references (6 - 2017) cited, but several in the above reference list.
	** Many embryology textbooks cited as sources in the list.		** Many embryology textbooks cited as sources in the list.
	** Good coverage of research literature.		** Good coverage of research literature.

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	* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.		* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.
	* Good balance of text and media.		* Good balance of text and media.
			* Relates the topic and content of the Wiki entry to learning aims of embryology.
	* YouTube video overview of the development of the respiratory system was a good inclusion and good animation.		* YouTube video overview of the development of the respiratory system was a good inclusion and good animation.
	** could have been inserted into project page in larger format for in-page viewing.		** could have been inserted into project page in larger format for in-page viewing.

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	** only one image in this section outlined in any detail the signalling process.		** only one image in this section outlined in any detail the signalling process.
	** needed perhaps some additional signaling pathway images.		** needed perhaps some additional signaling pathway images.
			* Glossary - clearly organised table structure. Easy to read with good brief descriptions.
			** Not all project terminology has been included.
	* Referencing - mostly correctly cited and referenced, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.		* Referencing - mostly correctly cited and referenced, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.
	** why were there 9 reference links inserted at the beginning of the list? These appear as numbered references but are not associated with any content.		** why were there 9 reference links inserted at the beginning of the list? These appear as numbered references but are not associated with any content.

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	* Referencing - mostly correctly cited and referenced, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.		* Referencing - mostly correctly cited and referenced, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.
	** why were there 9 reference links inserted at the beginning of the list? These appear as numbered references but are not associated with any content.		** why were there 9 reference links inserted at the beginning of the list? These appear as numbered references but are not associated with any content.
			** Many embryology textbooks cited as sources in the list.
			** Good coverage of research literature.
			** Not sure why for example "Hyaline membrane disease" used 1960's and 70's references.

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	** only one image in this section outlined in any detail the signalling process.		** only one image in this section outlined in any detail the signalling process.
	** needed perhaps some additional signaling pathway images.		** needed perhaps some additional signaling pathway images.
			* Referencing - mostly correctly cited and referenced, multiple citations appear correctly in the list, some errors in list.
			** why were there 9 reference links inserted at the beginning of the list? These appear as numbered references but are not associated with any content.

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