Talk:2017 Group Project 2 - Revision history

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	* UNSW image use is allowed, but suggests you have not tried to look for other original sources.		* UNSW image use is allowed, but suggests you have not tried to look for other original sources.
	* There are many additional useful images that could have been incorporated into the project page.		* There are many additional useful images that could have been incorporated into the project page.
			* File:Renin Angiotensin system.jpeg - student image has no additional information and is a simple drawing of a nephron, where is the Renin Angiotensin content?

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	* Referencing - good coverage of literature and sources, some errors in list.		* Referencing - good coverage of literature and sources, some errors in list.
	** Text referencing rather than PMID - this has been used extensively on teh project page. While acceptable, it means that the reference IS NOT directly linked or accessible from the reference list.		** Text referencing rather than PMID - this has been used extensively on teh project page. While acceptable, it means that the reference IS NOT directly linked or accessible from the reference list.
			** Ref 11, 14 and 21 - Are all the same reference (PubMed 3063284). This should have appeared as single entry in the list with multiple citations, as shown in the class tutorial and [[Help:Reference_Tutorial#Multiple_Instances_on_Page\|online tutorial]].
	** Ref 40 - Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)		** Ref 40 - Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)
	** Ref 49 - This appears to be the incorrect reference for Hoxb7/GFP transgenic mice - G A Werther, W Banach, S Joffe, R Artal, M A Sperling Changes in glucagon do not play an essential role in the glucoregulatory responses to mild hyperinsulinemia in dogs. Diabetes Res. Clin. Pract.: 1987, 3(1);55-61 PubMed 2880702		** Ref 49 - This appears to be the incorrect reference for Hoxb7/GFP transgenic mice - G A Werther, W Banach, S Joffe, R Artal, M A Sperling Changes in glucagon do not play an essential role in the glucoregulatory responses to mild hyperinsulinemia in dogs. Diabetes Res. Clin. Pract.: 1987, 3(1);55-61 PubMed 2880702

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	** Ref 40 - Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)		** Ref 40 - Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)
	** Ref 49 - This appears to be the incorrect reference for Hoxb7/GFP transgenic mice - G A Werther, W Banach, S Joffe, R Artal, M A Sperling Changes in glucagon do not play an essential role in the glucoregulatory responses to mild hyperinsulinemia in dogs. Diabetes Res. Clin. Pract.: 1987, 3(1);55-61 PubMed 2880702		** Ref 49 - This appears to be the incorrect reference for Hoxb7/GFP transgenic mice - G A Werther, W Banach, S Joffe, R Artal, M A Sperling Changes in glucagon do not play an essential role in the glucoregulatory responses to mild hyperinsulinemia in dogs. Diabetes Res. Clin. Pract.: 1987, 3(1);55-61 PubMed 2880702
			** Ref 52 - Excellent inclusion of the Brenner Hypothesis and the related section on the project page. This could have been extended to include the DOHAD hypothesis.


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2017-11-15T07:38:09Z

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	* Glossary - useful, but too brief in listed terms (peer teaching).		* Glossary - useful, but too brief in listed terms (peer teaching).
	* Referencing - good coverage of literature and sources, some errors in list.		* Referencing - good coverage of literature and sources, some errors in list.
			** Text referencing rather than PMID - this has been used extensively on teh project page. While acceptable, it means that the reference IS NOT directly linked or accessible from the reference list.
	** Ref 40 - Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)		** Ref 40 - Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)
	** Ref 49 - This appears to be the incorrect reference for Hoxb7/GFP transgenic mice - G A Werther, W Banach, S Joffe, R Artal, M A Sperling Changes in glucagon do not play an essential role in the glucoregulatory responses to mild hyperinsulinemia in dogs. Diabetes Res. Clin. Pract.: 1987, 3(1);55-61 PubMed 2880702		** Ref 49 - This appears to be the incorrect reference for Hoxb7/GFP transgenic mice - G A Werther, W Banach, S Joffe, R Artal, M A Sperling Changes in glucagon do not play an essential role in the glucoregulatory responses to mild hyperinsulinemia in dogs. Diabetes Res. Clin. Pract.: 1987, 3(1);55-61 PubMed 2880702

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	** These factors are shown later on the project page, emphasising a better description of signaling required for better peer teaching.		** These factors are shown later on the project page, emphasising a better description of signaling required for better peer teaching.
	* Glossary - useful, but too brief in listed terms (peer teaching).		* Glossary - useful, but too brief in listed terms (peer teaching).
	* Referencing - good coverage of literature and sources.		* Referencing - good coverage of literature and sources, some errors in list.
	** Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)		** Ref 40 - Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)
			** Ref 49 - This appears to be the incorrect reference for Hoxb7/GFP transgenic mice - G A Werther, W Banach, S Joffe, R Artal, M A Sperling Changes in glucagon do not play an essential role in the glucoregulatory responses to mild hyperinsulinemia in dogs. Diabetes Res. Clin. Pract.: 1987, 3(1);55-61 PubMed 2880702

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	* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.		* 10 assessment criteria demonstrated with some exceptions.
	* Balance of text and media. Video is useful but not accurate in places and does not describe nephron development.		* Balance of text and media. Video is useful but not accurate in places and does not describe nephron development.
			** Animal Models table - could have been broken into more explanatory columns (peer teaching).
	* Elements of peer teaching.		* Elements of peer teaching.
	* Molecular - Table of identified genes was useful for molecular development and included links to research articles.		* Molecular - Table of identified genes was useful for molecular development and included links to research articles.

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	** These factors are shown later on the project page, emphasising a better description of signaling required for better peer teaching.		** These factors are shown later on the project page, emphasising a better description of signaling required for better peer teaching.
	* Glossary - useful, but too brief in listed terms (peer teaching).		* Glossary - useful, but too brief in listed terms (peer teaching).
			* Referencing - good coverage of literature and sources.
			** Why was a textbook used for horseshoe kidney instead of a research ops review article? (Moore KL (1992).Clinically Oriented Anatomy, ed 3: p223)

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	** Would have liked to have a link or figure showing signaling mechanism.		** Would have liked to have a link or figure showing signaling mechanism.
	** These factors are shown later on the project page, emphasising a better description of signaling required for better peer teaching.		** These factors are shown later on the project page, emphasising a better description of signaling required for better peer teaching.
			* Glossary - useful, but too brief in listed terms (peer teaching).

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	** Would have liked a categorisation of these factors (transcription, growth factor etc)		** Would have liked a categorisation of these factors (transcription, growth factor etc)
	** Would have liked to have a link or figure showing signaling mechanism.		** Would have liked to have a link or figure showing signaling mechanism.
			** These factors are shown later on the project page, emphasising a better description of signaling required for better peer teaching.

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2017-11-15T07:26:42Z

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	* Balance of text and media. Video is useful but not accurate in places and does not describe nephron development.		* Balance of text and media. Video is useful but not accurate in places and does not describe nephron development.
	* Elements of peer teaching.		* Elements of peer teaching.
	* ~~One student by~~		* Molecular - Table of identified genes was useful for molecular development and included links to research articles.
			** Would have liked to see a link to database OMIM or other for each factor.
			** Would have liked a categorisation of these factors (transcription, growth factor etc)
			** Would have liked to have a link or figure showing signaling mechanism.

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