Talk:2016 Group Project 5 - Revision history

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2016-11-14T02:12:57Z

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	* References related to main project concepts and included current research findings.		* References related to main project concepts and included current research findings.
	* Project could have used a closing section like future research directions, etc.		* Project could have used a closing section like future research directions, etc.
			* Project content language appropriate for university level student.


	===Edits===		===Edits===

Z8600021 at 01:59, 14 November 2016

2016-11-14T01:59:22Z

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	* Included quizzes were useful testing of topic knowledge. The quiz answers should have included additional descriptive information.		* Included quizzes were useful testing of topic knowledge. The quiz answers should have included additional descriptive information.
	* Collapsible Timeline was useful and referenced.		* Collapsible Timeline was useful and referenced.
			* Animal model section was very well covered giving several animal examples.
	* Glossary gave good brief descriptions of many but not all terms.		* Glossary gave good brief descriptions of many but not all terms.
	* References related to main project concepts and included current research findings.		* References related to main project concepts and included current research findings.

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2016-11-14T01:58:15Z

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	* Glossary gave good brief descriptions of many but not all terms.		* Glossary gave good brief descriptions of many but not all terms.
	* References related to main project concepts and included current research findings.		* References related to main project concepts and included current research findings.
			* Project could have used a closing section like future research directions, etc.

	===Edits===		===Edits===

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2016-11-14T01:56:51Z

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	* Collapsible Timeline was useful and referenced.		* Collapsible Timeline was useful and referenced.
	* Glossary gave good brief descriptions of many but not all terms.		* Glossary gave good brief descriptions of many but not all terms.
			* References related to main project concepts and included current research findings.


	===Edits===		===Edits===

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2016-11-14T01:55:47Z

Comments

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	* Included quizzes were useful testing of topic knowledge. The quiz answers should have included additional descriptive information.		* Included quizzes were useful testing of topic knowledge. The quiz answers should have included additional descriptive information.
	* Collapsible Timeline was useful and referenced.		* Collapsible Timeline was useful and referenced.
			* Glossary gave good brief descriptions of many but not all terms.

	===Edits===		===Edits===

Z8600021: /* Comments */

2016-11-14T01:54:29Z

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	* This is a well structured project with a good balance between text and graphic components.		* This is a well structured project with a good balance between text and graphic components.
	* Several images needed to be deleted from the project due to copyright issues.		* Several images needed to be deleted from the project due to copyright issues.
	* Included quizzes were useful testing of topic knowledge. ~~Some questions were not well structured~~.		* Included quizzes were useful testing of topic knowledge. The quiz answers should have included additional descriptive information.
			* Collapsible Timeline was useful and referenced.


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2016-11-14T00:50:04Z

Assessment

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	==Assessment==		==Assessment==
	{{Group Assessment Criteria table}}		{{Group Assessment Criteria table}}

			==Comments==

			* This is a well structured project with a good balance between text and graphic components.
			* Several images needed to be deleted from the project due to copyright issues.
			* Included quizzes were useful testing of topic knowledge. Some questions were not well structured.

	===Edits===		===Edits===

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	* Z5039628 - copyright deletion.		* Z5039628 - copyright deletion.
	* Z3516832 - copyright deletion.		* Z3516832 - copyright deletion.
			* Video - Adult Tbx3;PrxCre mutant mouse is healthy and mobile despite forelimb deformities - good inclusion, relevant to project topic.
	Some image citations have not been included correctly, as shown in the class tutorial.		* Some image citations have not been included correctly, as shown in the class tutorial.

	<gallery>		<gallery>

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2016-11-14T00:42:40Z

Media

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			File:Nadine Dobrovolskaia-Zavadskaia 1948.jpg\|Nadine Dobrovolskaia-Zavadskaia 1948 Z3516832 Historic image.
	File:TBX_5_3D_strcture.png\|Tbx5 3D structure Z5020373 Student template and reference. The original journal J Mol Biol. has copyright, you should cite MMDB as shown by the [https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/Structure/mmdb/mmdbsrv.cgi?uid=81644 citation link]		File:TBX_5_3D_strcture.png\|Tbx5 3D structure Z5020373 Student template and reference. The original journal J Mol Biol. has copyright, you should cite MMDB as shown by the [https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/Structure/mmdb/mmdbsrv.cgi?uid=81644 citation link]
	File:Typical tbx protein structure.png\|tbx protein structure Z5020373 student dean image includes original Ref and student template. Includes image description and relevant to project.		File:Typical tbx protein structure.png\|tbx protein structure Z5020373 student dean image includes original Ref and student template. Includes image description and relevant to project.

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2016-11-14T00:35:48Z

Media

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	File:T box in chick.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright (incorrect) and student template included. This image cannot be reused online without Journal permission and payment (32.20 USD) and has been deleted from the project.		File:T box in chick.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright (incorrect) and student template included. This image cannot be reused online without Journal permission and payment (32.20 USD) and has been deleted from the project.
	File:Chew et al 2012 Figure 2 Tammar wallaby limb formation.jpg\|Z3516832 Reference, copyright (incorrect) and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend.		File:Chew et al 2012 Figure 2 Tammar wallaby limb formation.jpg\|Z3516832 Reference, copyright (incorrect) and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend.
	File:Amphioxus development.gif\|Z3516832		File:Amphioxus development.gif\|Z3516832 Copyright and student template included. Image is relevant to project, image description could have had more information that relaled to your project. Reference not included correctly as a citation required by the journal for reuse. Citation - <pubmed>26052418</pubmed>
	</gallery>		</gallery>

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2016-11-14T00:17:54Z

Media

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	File:Evolution of T box gene Family.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend. The only change to the original image is to change the colour of the boxes, this is not sufficient to qualify as "modified", therefore this image cannot be reused online without permission and has been deleted from the project. Citation - <pubmed>25294936</pubmed>		File:Evolution of T box gene Family.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend. The only change to the original image is to change the colour of the boxes, this is not sufficient to qualify as "modified", therefore this image cannot be reused online without permission and has been deleted from the project. Citation - <pubmed>25294936</pubmed>
	File:T box in chick.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright (incorrect) and student template included. This image cannot be reused online without Journal permission and payment (32.20 USD) and has been deleted from the project.		File:T box in chick.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright (incorrect) and student template included. This image cannot be reused online without Journal permission and payment (32.20 USD) and has been deleted from the project.
	File:Chew et al 2012 Figure 2 Tammar wallaby limb formation.jpg\|Z3516832		File:Chew et al 2012 Figure 2 Tammar wallaby limb formation.jpg\|Z3516832 Reference, copyright (incorrect) and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend.
	File:Amphioxus development.gif\|Z3516832		File:Amphioxus development.gif\|Z3516832
	</gallery>		</gallery>

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	File:Evolution of T box gene Family.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend. The only change to the original image is to change the colour of the boxes, this is not sufficient to qualify as "modified", therefore this image cannot be reused online without permission and has been deleted from the project. Citation - <pubmed>25294936</pubmed>		File:Evolution of T box gene Family.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend. The only change to the original image is to change the colour of the boxes, this is not sufficient to qualify as "modified", therefore this image cannot be reused online without permission and has been deleted from the project. Citation - <pubmed>25294936</pubmed>
	File:T box in chick.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright (incorrect) and student template included. This image cannot be reused online without Journal permission and payment (32.20 USD) and has been deleted from the project.		File:T box in chick.jpg\|Z3516832 Copyright (incorrect) and student template included. This image cannot be reused online without Journal permission and payment (32.20 USD) and has been deleted from the project.
	File:Chew et al 2012 Figure 2 Tammar wallaby limb formation.jpg\|Z3516832		File:Chew et al 2012 Figure 2 Tammar wallaby limb formation.jpg\|Z3516832 Reference, copyright (incorrect) and student template included. Image relevant to project, description from original figure legend.
	File:Amphioxus development.gif\|Z3516832		File:Amphioxus development.gif\|Z3516832
	</gallery>		</gallery>