File:Oral Clefting.JPG - Revision history

S8600021 at 03:49, 24 October 2011

2011-10-24T03:49:19Z

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	- Though there are several included lower in the project that show exactly the same concept.		- Though there are several included lower in the project that show exactly the same concept.
	- The numbering 1 and 2 are in the reverse order than the images appear on the page.		- The numbering 1 and 2 are in the reverse order than the images appear on the page.
			- Is the first image (2) a palatal shelf or primary palate problem. I think you have got this wrong.

			Overall this figure while a fair illustration, did not add significantly to the overall project and has some design and labelling errors.


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2011-10-24T03:47:14Z

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	+ This is a reasonable drawing of the 2 abnormalities.		+ This is a reasonable drawing of the 2 abnormalities.
			+/- The image is a little bigger than it should be for its position on the project page.
			+/- The student drawn animation shown lower on the project page would have been sufficient to cover this criteria.
			- The image description is very brief and there is no indication of the original image used for inspiration.
	- Though there are several included lower in the project that show exactly the same concept.		- Though there are several included lower in the project that show exactly the same concept.
	- The numbering 1 and 2 are in the reverse order than the images appear on the page.		- The numbering 1 and 2 are in the reverse order than the images appear on the page.
	~~+/- The image is a little bigger than it should be for its position on the project page.~~
	~~+/- The student drawn animation shown lower on the project page would have been sufficient to cover this criteria.~~


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2011-10-24T03:45:39Z

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	The image shows an example of Oral Clefting.		The image shows an example of Oral Clefting.

	~~--14:42, 24 October 2011 (EST)~~ This is a reasonable drawing of the 2 abnormalities. Though there are several included lower in the project that show exactly the same concept.		===Assessment===

			+ This is a reasonable drawing of the 2 abnormalities.
			- Though there are several included lower in the project that show exactly the same concept.
			- The numbering 1 and 2 are in the reverse order than the images appear on the page.
			+/- The image is a little bigger than it should be for its position on the project page.
			+/- The student drawn animation shown lower on the project page would have been sufficient to cover this criteria.


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2011-10-24T03:42:45Z

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	The image shows an example of Oral Clefting.		The image shows an example of Oral Clefting.

			--14:42, 24 October 2011 (EST) This is a reasonable drawing of the 2 abnormalities. Though there are several included lower in the project that show exactly the same concept.


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2011-10-12T03:05:13Z

This image was drawn by student z3284061. The image shows an example of Oral Clefting. {{Template:2011 Student Image}}

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This image was drawn by student z3284061.

The image shows an example of Oral Clefting.

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