Student REVIEWS: Melanocytes Peer review: Hello. I have had a look at your project and it seems your group is doing really well overall. There seems to be some missing information on the skin, I assume you are still researching that and collating your information. The use of images throughout is excellent, all your images are properly referenced and a good example to learn from. I cannot really suggest anything at this point apart from to keep researching and get going with the missing sections.
Group 4: cardiac Z5091101 (talk) 20:10, 3 October 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 20:10, 3 October 2018 (AEST) This project is coming along very well. Perhaps consider using a few more references as your list seems short. Also, I did like the use of a video but ideally it should be very short. I don't feel that many people will actually watch a 9 minute video. Perhaps a stop motion clip or a flow chart summary could replace this to make it easy to understand? Overall this is great work and seems to be a rather complex topic. Keep it up group 4.
Group 5:DRG [User:Z5091101|Z5091101]] (talk) 20:14, 3 October 2018 (AEST)z5091101Z5091101 (talk) 20:14, 3 October 2018 (AEST) There has been an extensive use of references which is great especially since this topic seems to be really complex. Maybe a few more images for the beginning part of the article will make it look more user-friendly. Definitely have a look over for any grammar/spelling issues.
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